The language paper: reading questions in order
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Time follows marks
A 4-mark question deserves about five minutes; a 20-mark evaluation deserves twenty-five. The commonest disaster is spending fifteen minutes on question 1 and four on question 4. Write your finish time for each question on the paper before you start writing anything — it takes thirty seconds and saves the paper.
Each question has a shape
List four things: four short answers, no analysis, no quotations needed. Language analysis: quote, name the method, explain the effect on the reader. Structure: talk about where the writer puts things and how the focus SHIFTS, not about words. Evaluation: agree, disagree, or partly — and defend it with evidence. Answering in the wrong shape wastes correct thinking.
Embed quotations, do not announce them
Weak: "This is shown in the quote 'the sky bruised purple'." Strong: "The sky, 'bruised purple', carries the violence forward into the weather itself." Embedding keeps your sentence flowing and lets you analyse a single word rather than a whole line — which is where the higher marks are.
A paper worth 40 marks in 1 hour 45, minus 15 minutes reading, leaves 90 minutes — a little over 2 minutes per mark. So the 4-mark question gets 8 minutes, the 8-mark gets 17, the 12-mark gets 25, and the 16-mark gets 35. Write those four times in the margin before you start. The candidate who spends 20 minutes perfecting the 4-mark answer has taken 12 minutes from the 16-mark one.
The structure question, which most candidates answer wrongly
It asks how the writer ORDERS the text, and most pupils answer it as another language question and lose most of the marks. Talk about where the focus starts, where it moves and where it narrows or widens: an opening on a whole landscape, a shift to one figure, a final zoom to a hand. The word "shifts" should appear in your answer.
Evaluation: you are allowed to disagree
The evaluation question gives you a statement and asks how far you agree. A confident partial disagreement, argued with evidence, scores better than dutiful agreement. Say what the writer does well, then where the effect is weaker or more complicated than the statement claims. The mark is for a judgement you can support, not for approval.